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The Bridge Is Over

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Big shout out to Boogie Down Productions
Scott LaRock Rest In Peace
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Big shout out to KRS One
Knowledge Reigns Supreme

I was born in September and I’m a Libra
God blessed me that’s why I’m a believer
Over achiever I make winning look easy
Numerical alphabetical A-to-Z
Zig Zag Zig see me travelin through time
I can change the world with the power of a rhyme
FDR’s on a dime Abe Lincoln’s on a penny
E Pluribus Unum means ‘one out of many’
Money is the route of all evil
If knowledge is power than power to the people
I’m smokin herbals 360 is a circle
There’s 4,080 different ways to jerk you
And 30 days in a month
29 grams in an ounce every day you smoke a blunt
And that leaves you with 29 roaches
So on the 30 th day you can smoke your troubles away

Chorus

De De De Dada Dee Dee Deedy Dady Day
All you sucker MCs won’t you please come out and play (repeat)

I’m gonna start at Z and bring it back to A
I’m gonna start tonight and bring it back to yesterday
What more can I say the cat caught my tounge
The center of the Sun that’s where I’m comin from
Bangin on a war drum I got rhythm
Stayin in charge so large is how I’m livin
100 percent legit I never quit
Physically fit this is as good as it gets
I’m a go-getter I make moves like chess
Think two moves ahead and score 100 on the test
I’m from back East but I’ve been out west
To the Bay and I’ve even been to L.A.
But I’ve also been to the Sun and the Moon
The longest day of the year’s always in June
The shortest day of the year is in December
Remember I said I was born in September

Chorus

I’ll keep it simple I’ll pop a rapper like a pimple
I launder my money so my hundreds’ never wrinkled
A live wire you singin the blues like a sapphire
You can’t be serious this has got to be a satire
I can rhyme forever you can’t even say a verse
On beat you mumble your style’s the worst
With that fast rappity rap and sayin nada
You dress like a bum even the devil’s wearin Prada
The Godfather Goodfella good gracious
Livin large vacations to different places
Travelin round the world with my mind at ease
Like the Equator completin 360 degrees
Negro please don’t make the same mistake as the last guy
I’m a Big Mack and you a small fry
Comin at you like a tidal wave
On the front end and on the back end I’m getting paid

Repeat Chorus

@Revolver Ocelot Take all the time you need
 
5 Grand said:
@Revolver Ocelot you are clearly a white boy that wishes he had something to rap about.

You haven't produced a clear explanation of what you don't like about my lyrics or delivery.


You sound like a lil kid that can't express himself clearly so you make ad hominem attacks to try to divert attention away from the fact that you don't have a valid point.


If you want to make your point to me and everybody on ABW then you are going to do better than saying "you suck" Everybody on ABW debates Hip Hop, MCs, lyrics, wordplay and storytelling all day long. That's all we do all the time. And the best you can do is say, "you suck" and post a meme.

Personally I think you are a white boy that tried to rap and couldn't get anywhere. You are a player hater. You're mad because you can't rap on beat and it pisses you off that I'm doing what you wish you could do.
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You want me to write a thesis on how terrible your bars, flow and wordplay are..... :foh5:


FOH

I'm not the only person who told you your a fuckn horrible rapper.

NOBODY thinks you're any good.
 
Revolver Ocelot said:
You want me to write a thesis on how terrible your bars, flow and wordplay are..... :foh5:


FOH

I'm not the only person who told you your a fuckn horrible rapper.

NOBODY thinks you're any good.
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O.K. I'm going to take the time to explain this to you;


You said I'm a "fuckin horrible rapper".


But we're on the second page of this thread, and we'll probably be on the third page of this thread and you still haven't dissected any of the rhymes I posted to explain what you don't like.


I'f I'm such a bad rapper, you should be able to pick some lines that you don't like and explain what you don't like about them. After all, this is a messageboard The purpose of a message board is to exchange ideas and dialogue back and forth. You aren't doing that, you are making 2 and 3 word posts, and saying "you suck". That's hardly a coherent argument.


There are 10 page threads about every rapper that's come out in the past 20 years where people dissect lyrics and debate them. You haven't done that, you just keep saying "you aren't a good rapper" but you haven't backed up your opinion with a coherent argument.


Obviously you tried to rap, couldn't keep a beat, nobody would work with you, you tried to make a song and got laughed at, tried to rap on stage and got booed, so the only thing you can do is throw darts at somebody that is living out their dream.


You don't have any constructive criticism. You haven't made any valid points and I'm 100% sure that everybody on ABW agrees with me that you have not made any valid points in this discussion. You just keep saying "you suck" "you suck" "you suck" but haven't made any effort to support your opinion.
 
LMAOOOOO @5 Grand got time today!

Homie REALLY took issue w "the worst rapper to ever put pen to pad" comment.

FWIW imo ur delivery isn't horrible. Its jus that u dont rap on beat for shit...

It's like ur try not to rap on beat. Plus u pick the worst beats ever. And the over the top racism doesnt help
 
5 Grand said:
you still haven't dissected any of the rhymes I posted
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:lol10: :lol10: :lol10:







Someone asked you to explain one of your horrible ass raps in other thread. And slow ass couldn't or wouldn't.


But you want me too......
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