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Revolver Ocelot Explain Yourself

Revolver Ocelot said:
This retarded shit doesn't even make sense. Song is called Pimp Game and only the 2nd verse is even remotely on topic. 1st and 3rd verses have jack shit to do with "Pimp Game ", your talking bout slavery and whatever else pops up in your delusional ass mind.

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Harsh rebuttal but factual
 
Ayo lmao


Unless your alter ego’s Aquaman you should be nervous
Cause I’m the 5,000LB man at your service
On time like a Mavado that’s my motto
So step off you have a better chance hitting the lotto
Barricade the door if you think you see me coming
Nigga With Attitude 100 miles and running


no wordplay for aquaman and 5,000lb men don’t run 1 mile let alone 1,000 miles…
 
5 Grand said:
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I want you to explain to me and everybody on ABW how I am, "the shittiest rapper to ever put pen to pad and have the audacity to record it"


I am going to post my favorite songs and I want you to pick the bars, lines, punchlines and wordplay that supports your statement that I am the "shittiest rapper...."








































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Do you know this woman that you keep using her picture?
 
5 Grand said:
@Revolver Ocelot




The Pimp Game

Word up We about to talk about the pimp game

I need a plan to get to heaven before I’m 77
Even if I need to pack a weapon
To get there I’ll fight as fair as the next man
Bullets don’t kill but cause and effect can
Injectin heroin between your toes God knows
Weed smoke in your lungs and coke in your nose
I compose a perfect rhyme about organized crime
In my prime and I’m ready for Showtime
Ready for war hardcore like a whore
At 3:00 in the morning lookin for
A John so she can make a quick transaction
She’s an expert at bringin men to satisfaction
She’s seen more action than troops in Iraq and
Afghanistan layin underneath a man
It’s the world’s oldest profession
And a pimp is the second oldest any questions

(Chorus)

I know the pimp game well I grew up in a brothel
My childhood was just awful
You could have the strongest rap in the world
But you ain’t a pimp unless you getting money from the girl

The first rule of being a hustler never dress bummy
Look like you have money
The second rule is that your word is bond
Remember that and you’ll go far and beyond

If you wanna be a pimp then you gotta get money
She got junk in the trunk figure it out dummy
With my mind on my money and my money on my mind
I’m a professional and my style is refined
Now bear in mind I’m inclined to get violent
And when the shit hits the fan I’m inciting a riot
Quiet mild mannered I acknowledge knowledge
Pick it up off the street or learn it in college
There’s a lesson to be learned seven days of the week
So exchange ideas and think before you speak
Acquire knowledge and the skills to pay the bills
Keep it real steel sharpens steel
You could do what you feel or do what you like
Everything is fair you got that right
But if you don’t believe in God you got it all wrong
And that’s why God Bless The Child’s my theme song

(Repeat chorus)

The third rule should have been number one to me
Finish high school and get a college degree

The fruits of my labor are better than gold
See my name in capital letters all bold
22 point font what you want
Avant see me at a 5 star restaurant
You at Burger King tryna buy one chicken wing
You can’t afford the whole thing
The stakes are high take a stand and testify
You ain’t seein nothin like a private eye
My money supply is near infinite
Ever since I was an infant I’ve been infamous
Mobb Deep the choice is yours Black Sheep
You could get with this or you could go to sleep
Pop pop seven shots from a .380
Drive off in a hearse or end up pushin daisies
Lately I’ve been thinkin about slavery
And how the white man acts so unsavory
They wanna fly a confederate flag
And pledge allegiance to a nation they never had
They have the nerve to say that Blue lives matter
When they kill another brother and we just get madder
You can take off your uniform and blend in with the crowd
Black men can’t do that that’s a fact
It’s a race war and my dick is my weapon
They shoot Black men we fuck white girls pregnant

Word up
Knowledge
Mic Shabazz
Wisdom
Livin large
Understanding
Stayin in charge
Culture Freedom
Got the boom bap
Power or Refinement
Boom goes the bomb
Equality
Word up to Islam
God
I self lord and master
Build/Destroy
I sincerely love Allah’s mathematics
Born
Ya heard
Knowledge Cipher
No diggity
Knowledge knowledge
All praises due
Knowledge wisdom
Arm leg leg arm head
Knowledge understanding
Word up
keep it real
Knowledge Culture
Mic Shabazz
Knowledge power
Boom Bap
Knowledge Equality
Knowledge God
Knowledge Build Destroy
Knowledge Born

@Revolver Ocelot Explain why I am the "shittiest rapper ever to put pen to paper"

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Not any sense
 
5 Grand said:
O.K. I'm going to take the time to explain this to you;


You said I'm a "fuckin horrible rapper".


But we're on the second page of this thread, and we'll probably be on the third page of this thread and you still haven't dissected any of the rhymes I posted to explain what you don't like.


I'f I'm such a bad rapper, you should be able to pick some lines that you don't like and explain what you don't like about them. After all, this is a messageboard The purpose of a message board is to exchange ideas and dialogue back and forth. You aren't doing that, you are making 2 and 3 word posts, and saying "you suck". That's hardly a coherent argument.


There are 10 page threads about every rapper that's come out in the past 20 years where people dissect lyrics and debate them. You haven't done that, you just keep saying "you aren't a good rapper" but you haven't backed up your opinion with a coherent argument.


Obviously you tried to rap, couldn't keep a beat, nobody would work with you, you tried to make a song and got laughed at, tried to rap on stage and got booed, so the only thing you can do is throw darts at somebody that is living out their dream.


You don't have any constructive criticism. You haven't made any valid points and I'm 100% sure that everybody on ABW agrees with me that you have not made any valid points in this discussion. You just keep saying "you suck" "you suck" "you suck" but haven't made any effort to support your opinion.
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Bruh you wack cuz none of you bars make sense it’s no theme no story just 5% shit. You don’t be rhyming you sound real slow. It’s terrible
 
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