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Anonymous said:
Here I sit in this shit hole of a pub waiting to see my dad after 18 years...could this be the day I finally get some answers? my mother is a coke head whore and compulsive liar so the truth was pretty much a stranger to me growing up...the door opens and I see him..he looks like me only fatter with more wrinkles...he looks like he needs a good nights sleep after he is checked over by a doctor..he smiles as he approaches but I can tell it's more of a nervous smile than it is a genuine happy smile..I stand up and keep eye contact as he extends his hand to me..I extend mine then pull away at the very last second..my thumb touches my nose as I wiggle my fingers saying "ner ner ner ner ner" he looks shocked and confused then tries to laugh it off but I can see I have annoyed him...this is just the beginning old man..you will pay for what you did to me and my coke head mother!
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Preach wrote this shit
 
Anonymous said:
Here I sit in this shit hole of a pub waiting to see my dad after 18 years...could this be the day I finally get some answers? my mother is a coke head whore and compulsive liar so the truth was pretty much a stranger to me growing up...the door opens and I see him..he looks like me only fatter with more wrinkles...he looks like he needs a good nights sleep after he is checked over by a doctor..he smiles as he approaches but I can tell it's more of a nervous smile than it is a genuine happy smile..I stand up and keep eye contact as he extends his hand to me..I extend mine then pull away at the very last second..my thumb touches my nose as I wiggle my fingers saying "ner ner ner ner ner" he looks shocked and confused then tries to laugh it off but I can see I have annoyed him...this is just the beginning old man..you will pay for what you did to me and my coke head mother!
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Aye bruh, I seen my father for the first time since I was 2 at the age of 14. Didnt even know who he was. Walked right past that nigga, he said "u just gone walk past ya dad". Gave homie a hug and my sister asked if I wanted to go to the store. I turned to my pops and he said "I'll be here when u get back son". Went to the store with my sister and came back. My aunt told me my pops bounced after we left. My cousin told me he left me a gift, I went upstairs and opened the box. Nigga left me a box of porno mag and tube socks...

At the time I was like
:cry:


When I got older I was like
:hahaha:

And you know why...cause that nigga a dick..thats such a dick move ...and if I was gone be a dick to the son I didn't want..

Ida done the same shit..

That's where I realized where I got my dickish sense of humor from

:Pathetic:me and my older sister can't wait till he die so we can get our hands on his 401k
 
Allergens said:
Aye bruh, I seen my father for the first time since I was 2 at the age of 14. Didnt even know who he was. Walked right past that nigga, he said "u just gone walk past ya dad". Gave homie a hug and my sister asked if I wanted to go to the store. I turned to my pops and he said "I'll be here when u get back son". Went to the store with my sister and came back. My aunt told me my pops bounced after we left. My cousin told me he left me a gift, I went upstairs and opened the box. Nigga left me a box of porno mag and tube socks...

At the time I was like
:cry:


When I got older I was like
:hahaha:

And you know why...cause that nigga a dick..thats such a dick move ...and if I was gone be a dick to the son I didn't want..

Ida done the same shit..

That's where I realized where I got my dickish sense of humor from

:Pathetic:me and my older sister can't wait till he die so we can get our hands on his 401k
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At least he ain't remarry and give all his shit to the new wife who he never had any kids with


Same chick who did time in jail for identity theft........... My mom's identity
 
I wanna change my vote

#2 Looks like it was written by a Kanye fan and I knew Word was lying this whole time
 
Had I saw this in time I would have written a conversation of straight dialogue with the son being a priest and the father doing confession....

I was listening to a bunch of confessions online to get used to how they go...

I'm still going to do this one day in a story..... Thanks for the idea
 
King Du said:
Had I saw this in time I would have written a conversation of straight dialogue with the son being a priest and the father doing confession....

I was listening to a bunch of confessions online to get used to how they go...

I'm still going to do this one day in a story..... Thanks for the idea
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I woulda done more with it but trying to stay as close to 25 lines as possible in a short time frame made it more challenging... @Kandy did a great job and she knew what she was doing...nobody wanted to read through a wanna be writers 22 page “prized work” lmao
 
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