Sports Bar Whats On Your Mind Thread

[#1hiphopjunki3]

@BlackAx410

That was pretty good man! I see you gotta throw in the NBA analogies. Lol. Keep following your dreams man

 

[L.L.R.J.]

Axel, only thing I’ll say is work on eye contact. You don’t have to stare at the audience but pause sometimes and then walk around on stage. I forgot how funny you are. Good work

 

[Shaquille Sunflower]

I see you AX! Yeah like Ro said just work on letting your jokes marinate.

 

[TheNightKing]

Here's my standup debut, positive or negative any feedback is welcome and appreciated

This was posted in another thread too. I left a little feedback there. Basically articulate a little more. That Maryland accent is thick bro, lol.

 

[BlackAx410]

This was posted in another thread too. I left a little feedback there. Basically articulate a little more. That Maryland accent is thick bro, lol.

Lmao yeah a few heads in the crowd made fun of the way I said certain words

 

[BlackAx410]

Axel, only thing I’ll say is work on eye contact. You don’t have to stare at the audience but pause sometimes and then walk around on stage. I forgot how funny you are. Good work

Yeah now that I'm out of the class ima hit up open mics 3 or 4 times a week to work on eye contact and timing, appreciate that

 

[Infamous114]

Great job, Ax

 

[L.L.R.J.]

Burger King taco?? Eh hard pass

 

[Dr. Nemesis]

That's that leftover Whopper meat

 

[Infamous114]

Burger King gets a pass, period

 

[wadupdoe!313]

Just got done watching last chance u season 4 and what a clusterfuck of a team and coach.

They were way too talented to win only 1 game JB is a shit coach.

 

[Dr. Nemesis]

My country ass really had the wrong impression of New England. Up in Connecticut for the first time and had to go to New Haven. This shit hood as fuck.

 

[313 Wayz]

My country ass really had the wrong impression of New England. Up in Connecticut for the first time and had to go to New Haven. This shit hood as fuck.

Did you try any of the pizza there? Saw different Youtube videos how the pizza in Connecticut is different from NY

 

[Dr. Nemesis]

Did you try any of the pizza there? Saw different Youtube videos how the pizza in Connecticut is different from NY

Nah, I'm still here. Dude that's my contact here kept going on and on about the pizza though. But ion even know if I wanna stop round here; I already told my job they gotta book me a new hotel

 

[Big_Ev]

Bruh...This new ALC and Schoolboy Q joint is crazy.

 

[Mister Breeze]

Don’t be fooled, Part of NE are hood as shit.

Hartford, CT

South Providence, RI

Parts of Boston.

They’re just few and far in between, but they ghetto as shit up there.

 

[Chi-Town B]

 

[L.L.R.J.]

Spit is the equivalent of a punch/slap in the face so I see no problem

 

[Dr. Nemesis]

Should've laid his bitch ass out on the track too

 

[Dr. Nemesis]

All I saw was was crackers and Asians walking their dogs in Harlem. I had the best waves in that bitch