COMMUNITY Rate the Bars - ABW Edition....OhMars

AP21 said:
M.C's passed the due date, Niggas? They do hate
You are Bobby Boucher, I'm the "Mane" like "Gucci"
I rock the Louie! But not like Kanye
Nigga see me kinda like Harry Belafonte
Step into the room they be like, "Ah, Day-O!"
Yeah, cause they know a nigga ain't play-doe
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The first part was straight, had a nice little flow to it. The play doe was wack to me.
Imma give him a solid 3
 
I can feel it in the wind (ooh ha, ooh hoo hoo ha)
I'll meet you there, five minutes after ten
That's 10:05 on the dot
Punctuality is crucial, if a novelist spot us they gon describe us as a tribe of troubled eyes on the spot
(Looking for the come up)
We got idle time, we got perfect tools
We got strategy, we got nothing to lose
Everything to gain for the gang that you claim
(Run up on you)
If you look the part then you'll be entertained
This is life in California phone your momma from the station
Cause you're trying to make bail, it can make you play fair
(It can make you wanna)
Turn your circle life square
(Get up off the corners)
Tell me what's the quota of a soda popping baby on my arm
With no looking over my shoulder, show me the way and I'm going to it
At the moment I just do what I know cause I know it's lucrative
Lucifer, loose my hands, let me be new again
 
AP21 said:
I can feel it in the wind (ooh ha, ooh hoo hoo ha)
I'll meet you there, five minutes after ten
That's 10:05 on the dot
Punctuality is crucial, if a novelist spot us they gon describe us as a tribe of troubled eyes on the spot
(Looking for the come up)
We got idle time, we got perfect tools
We got strategy, we got nothing to lose
Everything to gain for the gang that you claim
(Run up on you)
If you look the part then you'll be entertained
This is life in California phone your momma from the station
Cause you're trying to make bail, it can make you play fair
(It can make you wanna)
Turn your circle life square
(Get up off the corners)
Tell me what's the quota of a soda popping baby on my arm
With no looking over my shoulder, show me the way and I'm going to it
At the moment I just do what I know cause I know it's lucrative
Lucifer, loose my hands, let me be new again
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Wasnt feeling the first part of the this. Picked up though. Rhymes was straight, picture painting was aight.
3.268
 
I'm similar to Saddam, sometimes I question who's sane
Like fiends frantic for that last vein, stuck in the game
I hit the scene like sandstorms, then transform, watch me
I take the figure of 30 niggas who all got me
While bitches wonderin' who shot me
No love, keep a grudge, shootin' slugs like Muammar Gaddafi
Murder my friends, build a new posse
We takin' shots at paparazzi, go and fly now, nigga, like Rocky
 
AP21 said:
I'm similar to Saddam, sometimes I question who's sane
Like fiends frantic for that last vein, stuck in the game
I hit the scene like sandstorms, then transform, watch me
I take the figure of 30 niggas who all got me
While bitches wonderin' who shot me
No love, keep a grudge, shootin' slugs like Muammar Gaddafi
Murder my friends, build a new posse
We takin' shots at paparazzi, go and fly now, nigga, like Rocky
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This was pretty hard. I like the "take the figure of 30 niggas who go me" line. And he kept with the arab/desert theme.
4
 
 
 
last one

then i'ma start revealing

Everybody wanna get signed, but (I'm here to tell you)
Record companies act like pimps
Getting paid off what we made
when we the ones that's fly like blimps
But ain't no Goodyear, I tell it like it is
so I'm like look here
Just willing to get what I deserve,
my kids do have a mother
And a little house, with a dog in the backyard going "woof-woof"
Who knows what I must face when I leave this recording booth?
Poof, back in the real world where birds fly
From Miami by way of Cuba to whoever wants to get that high
There's clouds of clowns, seas of G's
Pro-jects, packed with playas meditating on their knees
Just to make them ends meet, like ground beef, you won't believe
The shit that niggas attempt
'cause they got other mouths to feed
Besides they own
 
AP21 said:
Born in the poverty probably we never get off the monopoly, won't we just stop it
With all the monotony, look at me awkwardly hide my broccoli, nigga what
Fuck the media, how could you come to me, follow me, bother me, tell me to simmer it down
Part of the system is worser now, melody murder must've ran
What if the rapture happens, nigga just deeper than rapping vanish or not
Never gone change my style, I do what I wanna pop, 'til the "Body Rot" stop
Generation X, I am the mastermind, general militants seven times, revolution rebellious, totally out of line
I still in the mind of apocalyptic, biblical optimistic
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OhMars said:
These bars where straight. Kinda of a stream of consciousness flow. Didn't really say too much.
3.85
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I know this was originally meant for Cain, and to see what he said, makes it even funnier

BONE
Submitted by 5th Letter
 
AP21 said:
cool

wait...did he really say 3.85?? lawd


"Promises are broken and more resentment come alive
Race barriers make inferior of you and I
See, in a perfect world, I'll choose faith over riches
I'll choose work over bitches, I'll make schools out of prison
I'll take all the religions and put 'em all in one service
Just to tell 'em we ain't shit, but He's been perfect, world"
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OhMars said:
I know who this is
2.5 middle of the road bars
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K.Dot
submitted by: Kandy
 
AP21 said:
I move like the Feds really watchin, in New York city shoppin
That's what they think, nigga, we really coppin
Look, I know what you really coppin
You rap the shit, I'm wrappin a brick look like I'm Milly Rockin
It take a hundred bands to fill these Rodmans
And I can rap, trap, stick niggas up, it's way too many options
You hatin niggas way too busy watchin
That's why it's on me, army jacket, the semi fittin in any pocket
For you learn to win you gotta handle defeat
Y'all scared, we prepared if guns jam up in beef
We got extra straps, extra clips laying on the seat
My plate full, but's that cool cause the plan was to eat, let's go
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OhMars said:
Real aggressive content here. But the bars themselves were very meh. Nigga rhymed coppin with coppin. Real simple shit for the most part.
1.92
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Benny the Butcher
submitted by: Achewon7
 
AP21 said:
M.C's passed the due date, Niggas? They do hate
You are Bobby Boucher, I'm the "Mane" like "Gucci"
I rock the Louie! But not like Kanye
Nigga see me kinda like Harry Belafonte
Step into the room they be like, "Ah, Day-O!"
Yeah, cause they know a nigga ain't play-doe
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OhMars said:
The first part was straight, had a nice little flow to it. The play doe was wack to me.
Imma give him a solid 3
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Another one originally for Cain lol​

Ice Cube
submitted by: Goldie
 
AP21 said:
I can feel it in the wind (ooh ha, ooh hoo hoo ha)
I'll meet you there, five minutes after ten
That's 10:05 on the dot
Punctuality is crucial, if a novelist spot us they gon describe us as a tribe of troubled eyes on the spot
(Looking for the come up)
We got idle time, we got perfect tools
We got strategy, we got nothing to lose
Everything to gain for the gang that you claim
(Run up on you)
If you look the part then you'll be entertained
This is life in California phone your momma from the station
Cause you're trying to make bail, it can make you play fair
(It can make you wanna)
Turn your circle life square
(Get up off the corners)
Tell me what's the quota of a soda popping baby on my arm
With no looking over my shoulder, show me the way and I'm going to it
At the moment I just do what I know cause I know it's lucrative
Lucifer, loose my hands, let me be new again
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OhMars said:
Wasnt feeling the first part of the this. Picked up though. Rhymes was straight, picture painting was aight.
3.268
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John Givez
submitted by: BDP
 
AP21 said:
I'm similar to Saddam, sometimes I question who's sane
Like fiends frantic for that last vein, stuck in the game
I hit the scene like sandstorms, then transform, watch me
I take the figure of 30 niggas who all got me
While bitches wonderin' who shot me
No love, keep a grudge, shootin' slugs like Muammar Gaddafi
Murder my friends, build a new posse
We takin' shots at paparazzi, go and fly now, nigga, like Rocky
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OhMars said:
This was pretty hard. I like the "take the figure of 30 niggas who go me" line. And he kept with the arab/desert theme.
4
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Pac
submitted by: Goldie
 
AP21 said:
last one

then i'ma start revealing

Everybody wanna get signed, but (I'm here to tell you)
Record companies act like pimps
Getting paid off what we made
when we the ones that's fly like blimps
But ain't no Goodyear, I tell it like it is
so I'm like look here
Just willing to get what I deserve,
my kids do have a mother
And a little house, with a dog in the backyard going "woof-woof"
Who knows what I must face when I leave this recording booth?
Poof, back in the real world where birds fly
From Miami by way of Cuba to whoever wants to get that high
There's clouds of clowns, seas of G's
Pro-jects, packed with playas meditating on their knees
Just to make them ends meet, like ground beef, you won't believe
The shit that niggas attempt
'cause they got other mouths to feed
Besides they own
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Come on son. Of course I know who this is. 4
 
 
AP21 said:
last one

then i'ma start revealing

Everybody wanna get signed, but (I'm here to tell you)
Record companies act like pimps
Getting paid off what we made
when we the ones that's fly like blimps
But ain't no Goodyear, I tell it like it is
so I'm like look here
Just willing to get what I deserve,
my kids do have a mother
And a little house, with a dog in the backyard going "woof-woof"
Who knows what I must face when I leave this recording booth?
Poof, back in the real world where birds fly
From Miami by way of Cuba to whoever wants to get that high
There's clouds of clowns, seas of G's
Pro-jects, packed with playas meditating on their knees
Just to make them ends meet, like ground beef, you won't believe
The shit that niggas attempt
'cause they got other mouths to feed
Besides they own
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OhMars said:
Come on son. Of course I know who this is. 4
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Andre 3000
submitted by: BDP
 
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