TheNightKing
J.A.P.A.N.
Just finished. So many opportunities to squash shit it made the whole thing fall flat for me. All she had to do when the husband got the pictures was say he forced the pics and raped me.
If she had and the husband just didn’t believe her that would have been better for the story. Her telling the truth the whole time but you not sure until the father admits his son was a piece of shit then the husband has to come to grips with how he treated his wife. Then the divorce would have made more sense too.
Or have a twist where at the end the son actually remembers seeing it and it was consensual.
So many more ways to make this more intriguing. I still wasn’t sure if she was lying or not. Why would her rapist jump in to save the son? I think I she lied about the rape shit to get herself out of a jam. Maybe I was supposed to walk away thinking that.
If she had and the husband just didn’t believe her that would have been better for the story. Her telling the truth the whole time but you not sure until the father admits his son was a piece of shit then the husband has to come to grips with how he treated his wife. Then the divorce would have made more sense too.
Or have a twist where at the end the son actually remembers seeing it and it was consensual.
So many more ways to make this more intriguing. I still wasn’t sure if she was lying or not. Why would her rapist jump in to save the son? I think I she lied about the rape shit to get herself out of a jam. Maybe I was supposed to walk away thinking that.
