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I know you here to put on a (A) display and that's fine but (A)stay in that line cause while you rappin' I got two arms tucked away the whole time Like your faceoff with Shine And that (B) pair will shoot parachute, it'll do more than (B) embarrass you Like your faceoff with Shine The last time they (C) saw dawg was with his (C) arms crossed...like yo' faceoff with Sh-

Niggas dont peep the rhyme schemes smh. Not to mention he tied that in with "memory lane" because his face-off was in the past and the LAST TIME WE SAW AVE BEFORE THE BATTLE HE HAD ARMS CROSSED (in a casket) SMH Ave was more aggressive and had better pacing but his material and structure was far inferior.

Matter of fact (A); lets make this simple and plain (B)
I grab this (A); they wont even remember his name (B)
He'll be past tense (A); literally go from Ave to Memory Lane (B)
First they gone Remember the plot
Then they gone Reminisce over Remington shots


"remember", "reminisce" "Remington" - Alliteration (words thats start with the same letter)

Also "remember", "reminisce" are synonyms for "Memory"

LOOK AT THIS SHIT! LOOK!

AVE DID NOT BEAT JC!

JC can do what Rum and Ave can; they cant do what JC does.
 
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Corrupted Monk said:
I know you here to put on a (A) display and that's fine but (A)stay in that line cause while you rappin' I got two arms tucked away the whole time Like your faceoff with Shine And that (B) pair will shoot parachute, it'll do more than (B) embarrass you Like your faceoff with Shine The last time they (C) saw dawg was with his (C) arms crossed...like yo' faceoff with Sh-

Niggas dont peep the rhyme schemes smh. Not to mention he tied that in with "memory lane" because his face-off was in the past and the LAST TIME WE SAW AVE BEFORE THE BATTLE HE HAD ARMS CROSSED (in a casket) SMH Ave was more aggressive and had better pacing but his material and structure was far inferior.

Matter of fact (A); lets make this simple and plain (B)
I grab this (A); they wont even remember his name (B)
He'll be past tense (A); literally go from Ave to Memory Lane (B)
First they gone Remember the plot
Then they gone Reminisce over Remington shots


"remember", "reminisce" "Remington" - Alliteration (words thats start with the same letter)

Also "remember", "reminisce" are synonyms for "Memory"

LOOK AT THIS SHIT! LOOK!

AVE DID NOT BEAT JC!

JC can do what Rum and Ave can; they cant do what JC does.
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Ave put his body bag in a body bag
 
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Corrupted Monk said:
I know you here to put on a (A) display and that's fine but (A)stay in that line cause while you rappin' I got two arms tucked away the whole time Like your faceoff with Shine And that (B) pair will shoot parachute, it'll do more than (B) embarrass you Like your faceoff with Shine The last time they (C) saw dawg was with his (C) arms crossed...like yo' faceoff with Sh-

Niggas dont peep the rhyme schemes smh. Not to mention he tied that in with "memory lane" because his face-off was in the past and the LAST TIME WE SAW AVE BEFORE THE BATTLE HE HAD ARMS CROSSED (in a casket) SMH Ave was more aggressive and had better pacing but his material and structure was far inferior.

Matter of fact (A); lets make this simple and plain (B)
I grab this (A); they wont even remember his name (B)
He'll be past tense (A); literally go from Ave to Memory Lane (B)
First they gone Remember the plot
Then they gone Reminisce over Remington shots


"remember", "reminisce" "Remington" - Alliteration (words thats start with the same letter)

Also "remember", "reminisce" are synonyms for "Memory"

LOOK AT THIS SHIT! LOOK!

AVE DID NOT BEAT JC!

JC can do what Rum and Ave can; they cant do what JC does.
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I just Don’t understand how you see/hear this like it’s regular shit

One thing I watch for especially in small room battles is the responses of the crowd of course
But the overall facial expression’s

The kid fucked Ave up

I hate the fact he over there w/them niggas
 
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Maywood said:
I just Don’t understand how you see/hear this like it’s regular shit

One thing I watch for especially in small room battles is the responses of the crowd of course
But the overall facial expression’s

The kid fucked Ave up

I hate the fact he over there w/them niggas
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Because this is just a section in a 3 round battle

Ave also rapped too and said fire shit
 
Maywood said:
I just Don’t understand how you see/hear this like it’s regular shit

One thing I watch for especially in small room battles is the responses of the crowd of course
But the overall facial expression’s

The kid fucked Ave up

I hate the fact he over there w/them niggas
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Niggas ear arent trained. Thats all. Niggas listen for individual lines instead of set ups, transitions, overall round structure etc.


And I think hes just really cool with them (EFB) Hes known Magic, Danny and Nitty for at least 8 years now; and and him and Geechi been more than cordial since their battle.
 
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Corrupted Monk said:
LOL cant rebuke that shit so you dont want to acknowledge it. You talked all that shit about "bar for bar" and "line for line" but you aint bout that.

BOO THIS MAN!
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I got a video breakdown of top vs JC posted

I would have to go back and watch that JC vs Ave again to do that and I got some shit to do soon.

I could probably watch it but can't get into the full breakdown until later

It's not about one individual bar or scheme being fire it's about what happened in the rounds as a whole .

There's no time you can quote a good to great JC bar and it not sound amazing by itself.
 
Loch121 said:
I got a video breakdown of top vs JC posted

I would have to go back and watch that JC vs Ave again to do that and I got some shit to do soon.

I could probably watch it but can't get into the full breakdown until later

It's not about one individual bar or scheme being fire it's about what happened in the rounds as a whole .

There's no time you can quote a good to great JC bar and it not sound amazing by itself.
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JC was doing crazy shit all throughout his round though.

Shut up.
 
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Corrupted Monk said:
So punches is all that matter? Did you see that "Memory Lane" breakdown?
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Don't try to box me in

It's more nuanced than " punches is all that matters"

For one thing Ave is one of the best and creative punchers ever so these ain't no " I kick shit like Bruce Lee" BS punches

Then Ave had that commanding voice,Presence, flow and his delivery and pace is deadly.

While JC is setting up for 2 -4 bars Ave already done punched twice and they shook the room or landed.
 
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