COMMUNITY Rate the bars - ABW Edition....Goldie

[AP2.5]

This my lil brother even though he dont like when i call him that, but thats why lil brothers are lil brothers.

This how we gon do this for Mr. Hip hop head.

We gon do 10 of these for goldie. Try not pick any lyrics from popular singles or universally known songs. Go into your b cuts. Im not saying the artists have to be lil dre from soundcloud, so lets stay away from those kinds of artists too. If you know goldie, you know he has a wide range of tastes in music. Most of us have debated against him in some form or another.

Send me a PM with the message titled "RTB" and send me some lyrics and the artist. Dont send me an entire verse either. Maybe 8 bars or so.

@Goldie, im asking you to not take the fun out of this and google. This should make for some interesting convos, so please man...dont google the lyrics. Rate the bars and tell why. Once you've rated all 10, i'll reveal whose bars you were rating.

Deal?

I'ma start it off with the first set of bars

Let me know when you ready

 

[AP2.5]

 

[Goldie]

I'm down lol let's go

 

[AP2.5]

aight...and even if you think you know the artist, dont say the name lol

this is from me and its a softball

The unfettered veteran, the eagle feathered man of medicine,
That hovers above cities like weather men,
And maybe weather woman,
Whatever better to tell ya weather comin',
I prefer girls to reign all over the world,
And not rain like, rain man or rain like rain dance,
Or rain like a slight chance of rain when it's raining,
Or rein like deer slaves to Santa Claus sleigh man,
But reign like Queens that reign over made man,
And not Queen like Queen killer, rhapsody bohemian Queen,
But Queen, like white glove wave hand, and not wave hand, like it's a heat wave,
So you make a fan by waving your hand, I'm talking wave, like you saying, "Hey man!"

 

[Goldie]

aight...and even if you think you know the artist, dont say the name lol

this is from me and its a softball

The unfettered veteran, the eagle feathered man of medicine,
That hovers above cities like weather men,
And maybe weather woman,
Whatever better to tell ya weather comin',
I prefer girls to reign all over the world,
And not rain like, rain man or rain like rain dance,
Or rain like a slight chance of rain when it's raining,
Or rein like deer slaves to Santa Claus sleigh man,
But reign like Queens that reign over made man,
And not Queen like Queen killer, rhapsody bohemian Queen,
But Queen, like white glove wave hand, and not wave hand, like it's a heat wave,
So you make a fan by waving your hand, I'm talking wave, like you saying, "Hey man!"

1

Shit's corny and yall know it.


Im a feather man , no wait a weather man or maybe weather woman?

 

[AP2.5]

yo yo yo my g...i clearly asked if you knew who the person was, to not say anything lol

i'll delete that part from your post

 

[AP2.5]

aight

next up

Rubber grip or the plastic feel
This that Brooklyn shit, this is not the norm
This that safety off with that engine on
Mercedes Benz, good watch, scene above them all
How he got money when he ain't have a job in so long?
This that hustler shit, that independent grind
That nautical sweat suit and white ones gold shine
Barbershop twice a week, stay sharp and in shape
In the chair, with the trigger hair, under the cape
This that first hand shit, Maybach, tinted windows
Not gonna rap about it but really seen it from my window
This that fine line between jail and my crooks
My bedroom at my mama house smelling like coke
This that gambling spot, stop bank, shoot it back
Metro North, with three birds in the backpack
Plenty trains on bitches, no names or pictures
Kept it low so she brought more things to fuck with us
This that half off credit, shit we don't respect
We just dead them if they try to do 60%
This that other 40% that minority flow
When all the achers sell hearts and only you sell blow
No pain, no gain, I profit of cane
Give a fuck who we slaying as long as my team remain
This that violating, y'all meet your death
This that vile cover, nigga, east versus west

 

[Goldie]

Idk who that is yet, but by the 3rd line "this that safety off with the engine on" I was like :wdf2:. Let me finish readin tho

 

[AP2.5]

nigga stop trying to guess lol

 

[5th Letter]

This thread has potential.

 

[Goldie]

aight

next up

Rubber grip or the plastic feel
This that Brooklyn shit, this is not the norm
This that safety off with that engine on
Mercedes Benz, good watch, scene above them all
How he got money when he ain't have a job in so long?
This that hustler shit, that independent grind
That nautical sweat suit and white ones gold shine
Barbershop twice a week, stay sharp and in shape
In the chair, with the trigger hair, under the cape
This that first hand shit, Maybach, tinted windows
Not gonna rap about it but really seen it from my window
This that fine line between jail and my crooks
My bedroom at my mama house smelling like coke
This that gambling spot, stop bank, shoot it back
Metro North, with three birds in the backpack
Plenty trains on bitches, no names or pictures
Kept it low so she brought more things to fuck with us
This that half off credit, shit we don't respect
We just dead them if they try to do 60%
This that other 40% that minority flow
When all the achers sell hearts and only you sell blow
No pain, no gain, I profit of cane
Give a fuck who we slaying as long as my team remain
This that violating, y'all meet your death
This that vile cover, nigga, east versus west

I give it a 3.5. There wasn't any real clever lines and imo in order to be a great rapper if ur not in the business of making entendres then you got paint pictures real well or flow crazy. It doesn't look like the flow was crazy cuz I didn't really see multis. But he did paint a good picture, he didn't paint that gangsta shit on the level of a styles p for ex, but he was decent. 3.5

 

[FakeOhMars]

Great thread idea. Let me find some lyrics

 

[AP2.5]

Great thread idea. Let me find some lyrics

bet

dont forget to send em to me

title it RTB

im looking for 8 more

i'm bout to post another one to keep the thread going

 

[Goldie]

Why did u delete it all tho lol U know i broke that shit down perfectly so niggas know why i say what i say.

 

[Goldie]

Ima add the line breakdown part back, i didn't mention homie in that part

 

[AP2.5]

Ima add the line breakdown part back, i didn't mention homie in that part

ok

you mentioned the song but misspelled it lol

 

[Goldie]

lol yea, that part was on purpose @ mentioning who it was

 

[AP2.5]

We the villains, we antagonist bad guys
Mercy me, merciless me putting pain in they sad eyes
It's time for Skywalker talk cause meet the true Darth Vader
I hit your mom in '03 but a G ain't ate her
So baby boy you should tighten up and show some respect
Before I Melvin on you Jody put my arm on your neck
Or worse yet be the reason your girl want a divorce
Be at her crib with your kids saying "fuck your fort
Lil' nigga!"

 

[Herbal Kint]

 

[Goldie]

We the villains, we antagonist bad guys
Mercy me, merciless me putting pain in they sad eyes
It's time for Skywalker talk cause meet the true Darth Vader
I hit your mom in '03 but a G ain't ate her
So baby boy you should tighten up and show some respect
Before I Melvin on you Jody put my arm on your neck
Or worse yet be the reason your girl want a divorce
Be at her crib with your kids saying "fuck your fort
Lil' nigga!"

This was tough to grade, cuz they had a fire bar but then followed it up with a corny bar.

I like the opening, "we antagonize the bad guys" i like the flow of that line, rhyming multiple times in one line, plus the content itself was dope.

Foh with that skywalker shit, then he followed it up with an even worse bar "i hit ur mom in 03, but a g aint ate her" ? smh

But then the put a arm to ur neck on some melvin shit was dope.

I give it a 3.