You're so good at this! Seems to come so naturally. Good for you!! So proud of you, jumping right in it like a pro!! Music sound is spot on now. Perfect volume to keep ear fatigue away. The little breaks were nice, kept it interesting(as far as the mind getting irritated with just straight talking the whole time). You got a nack for it, a voice for it, a mind for it, and a lot of wisdom you could pass on.
Also, cater to your audience but also don't. I wasn't a fan of the glass shattering? sound but others may like it. Few youtubes and pods I have "jarring" noises and it's a part of their identity. Some people love it, other don't. (One intro has a man screaming. So many people love it, some hate it. I'm one of the haters. A youtuber has a clang kinda noise as a transition, people complained and he took it out but then his videos were wack and didn't feel right so the sound came back. This what I mean peoples is fussy about some things but will literally ask you take make an hour long video of talking about nothing in particular cuz they just love falling asleep to the sound of your voice. Seriously, there's a guy who blabs about nothing just so others can fall asleep at night.